tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.comments2015-08-05T15:40:27.507-07:00All Behave!!Aimanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05502236038014397240noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-29953136338031235902015-08-05T15:40:27.507-07:002015-08-05T15:40:27.507-07:00If you need help with academic, business or indivi...If you need help with academic, business or individual writing, try out essay writing service <a href="http://britishessays.co.uk/" rel="nofollow">www.britishessays.co.uk</a>. Spend little money to get constructed essay!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09219969899284324020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-76571758878766112842015-06-17T11:13:20.222-07:002015-06-17T11:13:20.222-07:00Hello. Got a problems with agreement article to co...Hello. Got a problems with agreement article to college here is fine article producing assistance <a href="http://www.essay-writing-place.com/" rel="nofollow">www.essay-writing-place.com</a>. Elegant essay in the short term with guaranty!<br />johnsohn1https://www.blogger.com/profile/02651001647012931984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-2530279784738403142015-06-11T02:53:24.939-07:002015-06-11T02:53:24.939-07:00Confronted by the problem of creating a essay? Com...Confronted by the problem of creating a essay? Composition creating service <a href="http://globalessays.org/" rel="nofollow">Globalessays</a>. Just you can pay some money and get perfect essay from a professional<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-15843125722776824512010-05-25T06:17:53.399-07:002010-05-25T06:17:53.399-07:00this essay supposed to be a argumentative essay li...this essay supposed to be a argumentative essay like my roomate said just now. <br /><br /><br />clear thesis statement. <br />good points pointed out. <br />nice elaboration. <br /><br /><br />okayy , how u know paul nipkow invented the television ? which refferences ? <br /><br /><br />Hence, they will BE effortless when they face the complex and complicated situations in the mean time and the future<br /><br />i think the be should become <br /><br />His behavior should not BE COPY to the real life and can lead the children to vandalism and bullies.<br /><br />my opinion, should not be use in the real life <br />or his behaviour is not a good example in real life .<br /><br /><br />some children attempt to imitateD the superhero in the movie they have watched in television.<br /><br /><br />if possible reread your essay and try to improve it. <br />im not sure about the grammar. but it's better to take a look again. <br /><br />whatever it is , good job and sorry for the delay. u know im kinda busy lately. ;)kappahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02333498808707247818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-37824694353960036952010-05-19T20:36:32.160-07:002010-05-19T20:36:32.160-07:001. This is not Text production essay!!!
2. Please...1. This is not Text production essay!!!<br /><br />2. Please get your peer's comments and do draft 2.Sam July 09ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12433292072695265127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-54209331430951072802010-05-09T21:08:39.566-07:002010-05-09T21:08:39.566-07:00- Include some statistics in the introduction.
- ...- Include some statistics in the introduction.<br /><br />- Therefore, I strongly support...<br /><br />- The first sentence of body paragraph one 'There are many disadvantages of junk food' should be connected to the thesis statement.Move it up and connect it to the thesis statement.<br /><br />- To conclude, the junk food can be the culprit to several of other problems in school other than affects the students’ health. Grammatically this sentence is wrong as you have used two different structures in one sentence. So, break it and write as two sentences.<br /><br />- It is undeniable the consumption of junk food brings more harm than benefits...<br /><br />good job! get a print-out for the file.Sam July 09ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12433292072695265127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-30864428198924400082010-05-07T22:43:26.808-07:002010-05-07T22:43:26.808-07:00i think you should add some statistic on the intro...i think you should add some statistic on the introduction. you have stated clearly that you are against of selling junk food but i think your should connect your thesis statement clearly with the next paragraph. <br /><br />you have examples and sufficient points to back ur point. nice. :) <br /><br />im not sure bout the grammar but i think u should read it again. <br /><br />but take a look again at these sentence ; <br />Fast foods or junk foods are the food which can be bought within a short time with more taste<br /><br /> As teenagers most students are not worried about their health, they are more worried about the taste of their food.King's islandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01439703183003059588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-69286510194965946042010-04-14T21:16:06.528-07:002010-04-14T21:16:06.528-07:00Aiman, your essay looks fine. Get a print-out and ...Aiman, your essay looks fine. Get a print-out and submit to me.Sam July 09ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12433292072695265127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-41306964185362488302010-03-29T18:36:50.855-07:002010-03-29T18:36:50.855-07:00It is a clear introductory sentence that introduce...It is a clear introductory sentence that introduce about global warming and the introduction explains clearly.<br /><br />It's clear and well connected with the next paragraph as it stated the effects that might happen on the thesis statement. <br />besides, the paragraph do have sufficient supporting details and all of it have been supported with examples.<br /><br />im not good in grammar but i think your should re-read this sentence, <br /><br />at paragraph 2:<br />It was once thought that such things went in cycles but not anymore as carbon dioxide content keeps growing higher <br /><br />at the end of paragraph 3:<br />So, the storm will contain much energy and become a deadliest hurricane<br /><br />my advise read again your text production as there might be some minor mistakes.<br /><br />the conclusion doesn't summarize all the main points but it states how to overcome the problem. <br /><br />the writer cite the sources adequately and no incorrect citation have been identified. it do cover the standard sources which is from (Gore 2007) <br /><br />good work , keep it up. :)kappahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02333498808707247818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-65090484634406167822010-03-29T08:29:42.203-07:002010-03-29T08:29:42.203-07:00erraticerratickappahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02333498808707247818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-20273094081535121802010-02-22T22:09:25.154-08:002010-02-22T22:09:25.154-08:00Afif : brilliant!!!!Afif : brilliant!!!!Afif IZahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07698857593482636037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-11400767094068031582010-02-22T21:59:26.318-08:002010-02-22T21:59:26.318-08:00wow!!!wow!!!Aimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502236038014397240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-47510208507765057622010-02-22T21:46:48.686-08:002010-02-22T21:46:48.686-08:00paracetamol can prevent heart attack, good article...paracetamol can prevent heart attack, good article, provides useful information.MDMUAZZAMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15776284127719264454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-24004392764635884132010-02-22T21:44:34.538-08:002010-02-22T21:44:34.538-08:00Great~another new discovery in medical field which...Great~another new discovery in medical field which enable more drudgery to afford the medicine expense with a lower priceJimmyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04634793586136671716noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-26468407010027515892010-02-22T21:07:57.508-08:002010-02-22T21:07:57.508-08:00cheap way to reduce cases of death due to heart at...cheap way to reduce cases of death due to heart attack. interesting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-28677304454299861862009-09-02T04:19:37.672-07:002009-09-02T04:19:37.672-07:00hey..ur "about me"
what dont bully me?!!...hey..ur "about me"<br />what dont bully me?!!<br />i thk u r the one who bully peopleSynlynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14151557153877730682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-72032212873871508212009-08-27T00:36:29.885-07:002009-08-27T00:36:29.885-07:00lollolAimanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502236038014397240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-64098679077073111542009-07-27T19:21:19.725-07:002009-07-27T19:21:19.725-07:00u r the one should behave!!!!!!!
haha......u r the one should behave!!!!!!!<br />haha......Ng Boon Chenghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15684188073407323197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-644275997649788822009-07-27T09:14:33.973-07:002009-07-27T09:14:33.973-07:00Especially Aiman
=PEspecially Aiman<br />=PJenniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01203701969483836231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-70231316670479344252009-07-27T06:41:37.563-07:002009-07-27T06:41:37.563-07:00behave!behave!Synlynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14151557153877730682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-25179308748385665712009-07-27T05:41:07.979-07:002009-07-27T05:41:07.979-07:00syafiq didn't bahave??syafiq didn't bahave??A Paparazzi's Masterpiecehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05203483683117766146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-1163076931893375982009-07-27T02:41:54.734-07:002009-07-27T02:41:54.734-07:00HAIL!!!HAIL!!!A.P.E.Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13210248314153330514noreply@blogger.com