tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post2474175723635501054..comments2015-08-05T15:40:27.507-07:00Comments on All Behave!!: Text Production Essay - Draft1Aimanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05502236038014397240noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-41306964185362488302010-03-29T18:36:50.855-07:002010-03-29T18:36:50.855-07:00It is a clear introductory sentence that introduce...It is a clear introductory sentence that introduce about global warming and the introduction explains clearly.<br /><br />It's clear and well connected with the next paragraph as it stated the effects that might happen on the thesis statement. <br />besides, the paragraph do have sufficient supporting details and all of it have been supported with examples.<br /><br />im not good in grammar but i think your should re-read this sentence, <br /><br />at paragraph 2:<br />It was once thought that such things went in cycles but not anymore as carbon dioxide content keeps growing higher <br /><br />at the end of paragraph 3:<br />So, the storm will contain much energy and become a deadliest hurricane<br /><br />my advise read again your text production as there might be some minor mistakes.<br /><br />the conclusion doesn't summarize all the main points but it states how to overcome the problem. <br /><br />the writer cite the sources adequately and no incorrect citation have been identified. it do cover the standard sources which is from (Gore 2007) <br /><br />good work , keep it up. :)kappahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02333498808707247818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1174448070779994474.post-65090484634406167822010-03-29T08:29:42.203-07:002010-03-29T08:29:42.203-07:00erraticerratickappahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02333498808707247818noreply@blogger.com